"Apple's iPod: I've Got the World on a String (Shaped Earphone Chord)"

6 Reasons Why It Moves Me
1) I like how you summarized what an iPod really symbolizes in one word "simplicity"
2) It shows a lot about our culture how the iPod is constantly changing and updating to conform to the wants and needs in todays societies.
3) You make a good point about the "trademark white earbuds that signify Apple product..." I never really think about products in the sense that they are designed in a certain way to catch peoples attention that it is a certain brand and in the end may make more consumers buy that specific product.
4) "Owning an iPod is now not as much a status symbol as it is almost a rite of passage..." it is almost rare to see somebody using a different mp3 player than and iPod, I remember begging my parents for a year for an iPod
5) "iPod is a cultural icon..."
6) Anything is now accessible by the touch of a button.

Reasons Why It Unmoved Me
1) The conclusion was really long
2) The use of a lot of facts and numbers and years and so on in the introduction
3) There was a lack of personal experience in the essay