"In thinking about a certain idea, many sentences and ideas can be drawn by using detailed words within this idea."
The repetition of the word "idea" makes the sentence somewhat confusing to understand. I am not exactly sure what the sentence is supposed to mean, but I think the point that the writer is trying to make is that many other sentences or thoughts can be derived from a certain idea. Because of the repetition of the words the whole point of the sentence is lost. If they had just made the sentence simpler it would be easier to understand.
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