"It Gives You Wings"

Reasons Why It Moves Me
1) I like how you pointed out the advertising methods used to make consumers want to buy Red Bull
2) The part how you showed that the color red and the bull both symbolize "power" is a great connection to what producers want the consumers to feel when drinking Red Bull
3) I agree that Red Bull is not targeted to a specific type of consumer, and you made good connections to how Red Bull is helpful in todays fast-pace society.
4) "Red Bull provides such instant gratification..." similarly to many other products in todays society is a good connection
5) I thought that you really captured the personalities in todays culture. We are fast-paced and inpatient and also wanting the next best thing right away.
6) The producers of Red Bull know how to target consumers who live a hectic and fast-paced life but creating an energy drink that gives you so much "power"
7) I like the connection you made to college students not only using it to stay awake but drink it before going out on the weekend to help keep them energized.

Reasons It Unmoved Me
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2) Organization of paragraphs